The Haar

damp curtain, off-white
silent wave from ocean sky
pulled across the glass


Comments

Marnie said…
A good one for TBT with a picture?? It's a very visual poem - reminds me of our dear friend Pam.
Glenys said…
Yep, immediately thought of Pam. Never forgotten.
sarah said…
I meant to take a photo of the curtain of fog but got carried away writing the picture instead. I've got a picture now, will see if it does for a TBT one day.

Me too, thinking of Pam, every time I receive the gift of a haiku.

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